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Originally Posted by lucky me
Long time no see! I miss your posts here.  Things around here have definitely seemed more lackluster since you leaving.
Anyway....onto your new project. Good luck! Now, I took a quick look and I say this with all due kindness: Were you drunk when you wrote the blurb at the bottom of the front page? 
Here, I'll help you out and point out the errors (I especially like "we offer someone for everyone!  ):
Some that I bolded are just little punctuation errors, but some are major grammatical errors. I'm sure you know, I'm not trying to pick on you or anything; I want to help your site look professional.  |
Sadly I did not write the bottom blurb myself and that is one of the reason I published it here, knowing I would get some good eyes on it. I know my spelling and grammar stink. Thank you so much.
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